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在雅思写作中，好的开头能够给你的作文提分，而一个差的开头则会让你的作文惨不忍睹。今天，小沃就为大家介绍一下需要规避的一些开头。
一、废话连篇不知所云
典型失败案例：
Topic -Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the bookor the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the Internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play Internet games. So we can see the Internet is more and more important in our daily life.
二、中式英文人见人晕
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
三、观点模糊态度暧昧
典型失败案例：
Topic -Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
四、偏离主题无轨电车
典型失败案例：
Topic -It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
五、语法错误惨不忍睹
典型失败案例：
Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
六、过分简单没有重点
典型失败案例：
Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
七、用词不当，表达不准
典型失败案例：
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because the yare very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
八、意思重复原地踏步
典型失败案例：
Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
九、中国俗语胡乱翻译
典型失败案例：
Topic -Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children
十、观点武断 态度强硬
典型失败案例：
Topic-The importance of confidence
In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
朋友们学的怎么样呢？今天小沃就为大家介绍到这儿了，大家在雅思写作中就需要规避上面的问题哦。
